The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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information about the dimension of the

population

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in four countries in 2003 and an estimation of these figures for 2025 and 2050. The unit of

measurment

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measurement

for

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population

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the population

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million

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a million

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Overall

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, the prediction for Argentina, Indonesia and the Republic of Korea in the following years

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a growing trend,

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Italy will notice a reduction in the

population

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. It is evident that the main raise will be shown by

Indonesian

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Indonesia

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, where the

population

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will increase from 238

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millions

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in 2003 to 274

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millions

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in 2025 and 312

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25 years later.

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is the highest figure projected over the

47 year

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periods

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. Argentina will follow the same trend, where

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the citizen

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citizen

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citizens

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will almost double reaching 62

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millions

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in 2050.

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these two country

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this two country

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will forecast a remarkable rise, the Republic of Korea will estimate 4

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million

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millions

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million

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habitant

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habitants

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between 2003

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2025 with

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prediction for 2050. Despite

these growth

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this growth

these growths

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, Italy will be the only country showing

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opposite trend. The

popultaion

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population

figures will marginally and steadily decrease through the years. In fact,

italian

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counted 54

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millions

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in 2003, but it is expected a drop of 7

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millions

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in 2025 and

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in 2050.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, millions with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.

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4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
30
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

200 words

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