The table below shows population figures for four countries for 2003 and projected figure for 2025 and 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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information about the dimension of the

population

in four countries in 2003 and an estimation of these figures for 2025 and 2050. The unit of

measurment

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measurement

for

population

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the population

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million

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a million

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Overall

, the prediction for Argentina, Indonesia and the Republic of Korea in the following years

are

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a growing trend,

whereas

Italy will notice a reduction in the

population

. It is evident that the main raise will be shown by

Indonesian

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Indonesia

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, where the

population

will increase from 238

millions

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in 2003 to 274

millions

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in 2025 and 312

millions

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million

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25 years later.

This

is the highest figure projected over the

47 year

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periods

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. Argentina will follow the same trend, where

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the citizen

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citizen

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citizens

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will almost double reaching 62

millions

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in 2050.

Although

these two country

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this two country

these two countries

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will forecast a remarkable rise, the Republic of Korea will estimate 4

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million

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millions

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million

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habitant

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habitants

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between 2003

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and

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2025 with

same

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prediction for 2050. Despite

these growth

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this growth

these growths

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, Italy will be the only country showing

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opposite trend. The

popultaion

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population

figures will marginally and steadily decrease through the years. In fact,

italian

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were

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counted 54

millions

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in 2003, but it is expected a drop of 7

millions

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in 2025 and

other

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millions

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million

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in 2050.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, millions with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.

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