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The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The table and chart provide information regarding
population
 growth and the proportion of the
population
 over 65 over a 100-year period in
Japan
.
According to
 the information.
Japan
's general
population
 figures in 1950 were very different from those in 2005 and future predictions show even greater differences. In 1950, the number of
people
 was just over 84
million
, and only 4.9
percent
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per cent
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 (4.1
million
) of these
people
 were above the age of 65. By 2005, the percentage of older
people
 had risen considerably to 20
percent
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per cent
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,
while
 the
overall
population
 had shown a parallel increase to nearly 128
million
However
, total
population
 figures peaked in 2005. and
if
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it
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 is expected that the number of
people
 living in
Japan
 will fall substantially over the next 50 years to a little below 90
million
. In spite of
this
 fall, the rise in the ageing
population
 will continue, and at a faster rate, so that by 2055, 41
percent
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per cent
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 (36.5
million
) of Japanese
people
 will be over 65. These statistics show two contrasting trends in
Japan
's demographics that will result in fewer citizens, but greater numbers of elderly
people
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, japan, people, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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