Government should invest in teaching science subjects rather than other sunjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Children learn more effectively at a young age and are able to develop aptitude towards a particular topic when taught from a young. To develop, a

country

's potential to a higher degree,

government

incentives should be provided for schools to encourage learning STEM

subjects

. In

this

essay two main reasons for agreeing to

this

view are discussed; higher jobs and a lesser chance of brain drain for the

country

Firstly

,STEM courses provide more opportunities for students in their later life. Engineers, doctors , nurses etc all have higher-paying jobs with limitless potential available as a career path. These professionals

also

earn more in comparison. Doctors in Australia earn an average of $100k AUD

according to

an article in the finance magazine The Economist. Countries like Australia and America have to bring immigrants because their own

country

does not have enough workers in the field from India and China.

Government

should invest in more opportunities in STEM fields so that the

country

will be more self-sufficient.

Secondly

, people from countries like India and China are encouraged to learn maths and science from a very young age

due to

parental and societal pressure. In spite of

this

,young adults leave the

country

to acquire a better life for themselves and move to developed countries to study at university.

For example

, Indian students make up 40 % of international students at Melbourne university and they are mainly in the science field.

Moreover

subjects

like music and arts have very little scope for a

further

job when compared to the cost of education.

To conclude

, science

subjects

job play a vital role in the running of the

country

and the

government

should encourage the teaching of these

subjects

. But in my opinion,

this

may not lead to the prosperity of the nation. In the end, I moderately agree with the above statement as

government

intervention is good but may not lead to the desired outcome.

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Government should invest in teaching science subjects rather than other sunjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Your opinion

The table below highlights data on the number of travellers using three major German airports between 2007 and 2012.

Some people feel that public money should not be spent on cultural amenities such as museums, theatres and art festivals. How important do you think these things are to society as a whole? Are there any areas which are more important for the governments to fund?

Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?