Tourism has increased so much over the past 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment.However, others claim that it is goos for the economy.
The importance of touristry which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many
people
claiming that over the last
five ,decades tourism
has surged rapidly damaging local inhabitants and the environment,while
others believe that it is good for the economy.The substantial influence of this
trend has always sparked controversy over the
potential impact in recent years.Change the word
its
This
essay will further
elaborate my perspective regarding both negative and positive impacts and lead to a logical conclusion.
On the hand, tourism
is most beneficial for all countries ,firstly
, if more people
visit
the country they get to know more about the culture,traditions and customs of the country also
they can tell their friends and family about the place they visit
which may inspire them to visit
that place,however
, it tends to increase more tourist in future.In ,addition tourism
gains more job opportunities for local people
.For instance
, being a tour guide is a great way to earn an income as well as
handcraft things or famous food items.
On the other hand
,there is no doubt that travel also
gives a negative impact on the country.Sometimes tourists who visits
the local places can Change the verb form
visit
also
pollute that place by throwing vapours and bottles which is
harmful to the environment Correct subject-verb agreement
are
as well as
spoils the look of that area.Moreover
,tourism
also
rails the traffic jam in the
certain metropolis.Correct article usage
apply
For example
,when one can visit
megacities it is always teeming with people
,,
Change the punctuation
apply
however
it sometimes makes noise pollution which affects local Add a comma
,however
people
.
In conclusion ,I believe that tourism
is helpful for developing countries by spreading culture and tradition, however
some drawbacks can not be ignored like traffic jams and pollution made by tourists.Add a comma
,however
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