You had traveled by air and had an unpleasant flight. Write a letter to the airline company Manager about the following: - Describe the flight - Explain what was the problem -Ask how this issue can be solved

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction with the flight that I took on Monday. I was on a Lufthansa airline from Montreal to New Delhi and I boarded around 11 pm on Monday. There were a lot of passengers during

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travel too. One of the biggest challenges that I faced is the poor quality of food during travelling . It was so cold and tasteless .

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, I sat for almost 20 hours in a plane without having any rest because of a congested space for sitting .

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, I was so exhausted from the air travel services. I would be grateful if you could provide a quality snack to their clients and add some ingredients to make the recipes tasty and attractive.

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, you should

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arrange sleeping areas for travellers during travel so that they enable them to relax for their

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journey. Hopefully, you should emphasise

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matter . I am eagerly waiting for your feedback soon. Yours sincerely, Rahul Sharma.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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You had traveled by air and had an unpleasant flight. Write a letter to the airline company Manager about the following: - Describe the flight - Explain what was the problem -Ask how this issue can be solved

A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems might these differences cause? How might these problems be reduced?

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.