Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask other questions about the trip

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Dear teacher, I have heard that you are looking for parents who are interested in travelling with the school team.

Firstly

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,it is a long time since I have not visited a foreign country

due to

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my terribly hectic schedule,

therefore

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,I would not like to miss

this

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chance.

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,I will have an opportunity to keep my child under control during the trip. As I can speak several languages

such

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as Deutch,Spanish and English,I could help everyone to communicate with local people.Another suggestion would be to organize interesting games in order to make the journey unmemorable. It is necessary for me to ask you that the duration of the trip.When will we come back?The reason why I am asking

this

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question is that I must be at work on 1st October.With the exception of

this

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what I have to take with me like clothes and snacks. If you require any

further

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information please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours faithfully Malik Maliki.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

159 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

enthusiastic
valuable experience
expertise
educational objectives
supervision
ensure safety
bonding
workshops
logistics
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travel arrangements
clear communication
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