In recent years, there has been growing interest in the relationship between equality and personal achivement. Some people believe that individuals can achieve more in egalitarian societies.Others believe that high levels of personal achivement are possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual merits. Discuss both sides and gave your own opinion
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On one hand, people are claiming that individuals can achieve more in egalitarian societies. Equality can provide equal opportunities
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On the other hand
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they need the freedom to do the same.
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