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The diagrams below show how houses can be protected in areas which are prone to flooding. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagrams below show how houses can be protected in areas which are prone to flooding. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The diagrams illustrate two scenarios preventing
flood
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floods
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 that can cause
damages
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damage
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 to
building
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build
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 in
area
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the area
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. Apparently,
raining
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rain
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 plays a vital role in causing
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a flood
the flood
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flood
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floods
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, the
rain
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rainwater
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water
 runoffs the land and slides into
lower
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a lower
the lower
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 ground
area
 which is located near the river.
Therefore
, the liquid will be
stucked
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stuck
 in
building
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the building
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area
 which is the lowest part of
land
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the land
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. The stopbank was made to stop the
water
 flowing back
in
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into
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 the lowest
area
 where houses and buildings had been located.
In addition
,
floodgate
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a floodgate
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 had been placed on
ground
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the ground
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 level near the river,
this
 helps
water
flowing
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flow
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 through the pipe and is released to a large
water
 source.
However
, there are some places that
has
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have
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 no stopbank,
instead
 of placing
water
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a water
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 stopper,
building
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the building
a building
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 should be raised up to prevent the
damages
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damage
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 from
flood
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the flood
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. The buildings were raised higher than the 100 years
flood
 level. These two options can help many houses safely from natural flooding.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words flood, area, water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • elevated
  • flood-prone areas
  • protective measures
  • water levels
  • structure
  • contents
  • stilts
  • pillars
  • drainage system
  • divert water
  • managing water flow
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