The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart gives information on how the percentage of
population
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the population
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, who
were
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born in Australia and abroad, living in cities,
towns
or rural areas changed over a 15-year period.
Overall
, the main feature regards both types of citizens moving away from
towns
and rural areas, increasing the proportion of
people
in various cities in Australia.
It is clear that
towns
and remote villages witnessed a significant decrease in population between 1995 and 2010.
While
the ratio of national-born living in rural fields in 1995 was slightly minor than foreign-born during the same year, 30% and 40% respectively, in 2010 the trend shifted in
favor
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of
people
born in Australia. In fact, the percentage decreased by 15% and 35% respectively. The data is quite different for
towns
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populations, where
people
born in the country counted a marginal decrease
whereas
community born outside stayed steady.
However
, the upwards trend concerned only
people
living in the cities. In 2010, the population left
towns
and villages to re-populate major metropolitan spaces. A dramatic rise is shown by both Australian-born and foreign to 60% and 80% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words towns, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Demographic
  • Trends
  • Urban areas
  • Rural areas
  • Town
  • Native-born
  • Foreign-born
  • Migration patterns
  • Economic factors
  • Government policies
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Steady
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Time frame
  • Significant changes
  • Distribution
  • Notable
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