There is a increased use of technology in the workplace. some people find that is good for young peoples prospect of gaining a job and harder for older people agree audition
In today's perpetually transforming epoch. Technology has increased the world.
However
, few individuals find technology is good for the young masses' perspective for getting employment and hard for senior citizens. I fully agree with the above Nation and explained it in forthcoming paragraphs
Two commence with the agreement said of this
phenomenon, the first and foremost is lacking knowledge. In addition
, the older mass does not have enough knowledge regarding new technology stuff and also
they got a job in a particular company in their time when using of
automation equipment were not too much. So, older individuals are good at pragmatic skills rather than automation skills.Change preposition
apply
for example
, young men and women can live in the modern world and Dev no
everything regarding machinery things.So, Add a missing verb
has no
young
population are doing good work without any burden rather than the older ones.
Correct article usage
the young
Secondly
, older community
have many bodies related problems and have less working ability. Fix the agreement mistake
communities
In other words
, nowadays, older individuals have more in
health than in the past they are suffering from many diseasesChange preposition
apply
Correct quantifier usage
apply
such
. diabetes, high sugar levels and also
asthma and also
many companies prefer to take that employees
who Change the determiner
that employee
those employees
has
higher chances to trial a long time and Change the verb form
have
due to
low health and illness,health there is no idea of how they live long. So, many Industries prefer to take youngsters. Furthermore
, young society have
a Fairless ability and Change the verb form
has
also
good motives for their struggle, they able
to struggle in complex situations and Add a missing verb
are able
also
have the energy to do effort long-lasting production.On the other hand
,older
Correct article usage
the older
crowd
do not have energy . So, they cannot able to do work for a long time. Fix the agreement mistake
crowds
Therefore
, the younger ones good than the older ones.
In conclusion, younger human beings are becoming more productive and Fairless the ability for their company. So, youngsters are a good opportunity to Grab jobs rather than older people.Submitted by vaisuprajapati1997 on
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