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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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 of pictures
describe
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 the standardised procedure for reusing
the
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apply
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waste plastic bottles.
This
 process has 9-step from collecting the trash to producing
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the finial
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finial
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final
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 product, which can be used by consumers.
Firstly
, trash
in
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 collected in the waste bin, following the process of sorting and removing impurities from the waste material. After, picking up the useful portion of
material
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the material
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. Now, it's converted into the big building block
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 conversion into small bites. Those small squares are now
thourghly
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thoroughly
 washed in
large
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a large
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 container,
then
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and then
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 melted at
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a
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 certain degree to
mold
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mould
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 these tiny particles into
roller
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the roller
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 of large plastic sheets.
Thereafter
, those recycled roller is
basic
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a basic
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 raw material in order to produce furnished and useable products.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling process
  • waste management
  • environmental conservation
  • collection
  • transportation
  • sorting
  • cleaning
  • shredding
  • washing
  • melting
  • reforming
  • pellets
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • manufacturers
  • sustainability
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