You have recently seen a job vacancy announcement on a school website for the post of assistant teacher. You would like to apply for the position. Write a letter to the headmaster of the school.

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school

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the post of assistant teacher. When I saw some information about your school

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your website I was interested

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I really like your school

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. I am looking forward to your answer. Yours faithfully, George

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

126 words

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You have recently seen a job vacancy announcement on a school website for the post of assistant teacher. You would like to apply for the position. Write a letter to the headmaster of the school.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example for your own knowledge or experience.

Many people have difficulty in maintaining health diet. What are the causes of this problem ? How could it be solved?

Some people argue that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others believe that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information, so there is no need for printed books, magazines and newspaper. To what extent do you agree or disagree