The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The graph shows the recycling of three different

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of materials (paper and cardboard,glass containers,aluminium cans and plastics) over the period of 28 years from 1982 to 2010

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Units are given in percentage. From the

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it is evident that among the recycled materials paper and cardboard stood at number one followed by glass containers.Plastics

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the lowest percentage when comes to recycling. About 65% of paper and

cardboards

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cardboard

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are reused after which

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the ratio

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slightly increases in 1986 and

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drops back to 65% in 1990.In 1994

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recycling

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at its highest point which is 80%.After 1994 the ratio kept on declining and goes back to 70% in 2010 which was the same rate of 1986. Glass containers

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off from 50% in 1982 and

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all the way up to 60% in 2010.The most significant dip occurs in 1990

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the percentage was 40. Recycling of aluminium shows

gradual

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increase

through out

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the period. After every two years the rate increases by 5%.It starts off from 0% in 1982 and stops

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45% in 2010. Plastics were the least reusable materials out of all.It remains

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in

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the range of about 2% to nearly 10%.