Smart phones and other similar electronic gadgets have reduced the contact between friends. Discuss how far you agree with this statement.
Smart phones
and other electronic devices decreased physical Correct your spelling
Smartphones
contact
among friends. I totally agree with Use synonyms
this
statement because many young adults spent several Linking Words
hours
using a phone and they have no physical Use synonyms
contac
anymore to talk to each other.
One reason is that Correct your spelling
contact
people
spend many Use synonyms
hours
using their Use synonyms
cellphones
because they want to see what other individuals upload each day on Correct your spelling
cell phones
facebook
. Change the capitalization
Facebook
Firstly
, many Linking Words
people
are glued to their screens because they are interested in watching what other Use synonyms
people
upload or said. Use synonyms
Moreover
, many of these Linking Words
people
love to play Use synonyms
video-games
for so many Correct your spelling
video games
hours
., and Use synonyms
Linking Words
this
avoid them Correct your spelling
thus
having
Change preposition
from having
contact
with others. Use synonyms
For instance
, Linking Words
a
research made by the University of Los Angeles, explains that most of these teens spent more than 9 Correct article usage
apply
hours
using a Use synonyms
cellphone
during Correct your spelling
cell phone
a
day, and Correct article usage
the
this
avoid Linking Words
they
get in touch with other Correct pronoun usage
them
people
.
Another reason is that many of these individuals do not get in physical Use synonyms
contact
anymore because they rather have video callings to get Use synonyms
along with
others. Linking Words
Also
, they love to text Linking Words
to
each other Change preposition
apply
instead
of speaking Linking Words
with
because they find no Change preposition
apply
intersting
getting along. Correct your spelling
interest in
Furthermore
, many of them have invented a new written way to communicate Linking Words
each
other. To explain Change preposition
with each
further
, all over the world, many teenagers are so bored to write complete sentences that they use Linking Words
abreviations
that are difficult to Correct your spelling
abbreviations
understad
what those words Correct your spelling
understand
means
, so many parents have lost communication with their children.
In conclusion, I totally agree that Change the verb form
mean
smart phones
reduced Correct your spelling
smartphones
contact
among individuals because they are so fascinating to spend several Use synonyms
hours
using their Use synonyms
electronical
devices and they found not interested in Correct your spelling
electronic
speak
in person to each other. If Change the verb form
speaking
this
situation Linking Words
continuos
like Correct your spelling
continues
this
, society might get rid Linking Words
off
physical Change preposition
of
contact
Use synonyms
among
each other.Change preposition
with
Submitted by cuevas14dic on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?