Smart phones and other similar electronic gadgets have reduced the contact between friends. Discuss how far you agree with this statement.
Smart phones
and other electronic devices decreased physical Correct your spelling
Smartphones
contact
among friends. I totally agree with this
statement because many young adults spent several hours
using a phone and they have no physical contac
anymore to talk to each other.
One reason is that Correct your spelling
contact
people
spend many hours
using their cellphones
because they want to see what other individuals upload each day on Correct your spelling
cell phones
facebook
. Change the capitalization
Facebook
Firstly
, many people
are glued to their screens because they are interested in watching what other people
upload or said. Moreover
, many of these people
love to play video-games
for so many Correct your spelling
video games
hours
., and this
avoid them Correct your spelling
thus
having
Change preposition
from having
contact
with others. For instance
, a
research made by the University of Los Angeles, explains that most of these teens spent more than 9 Correct article usage
apply
hours
using a cellphone
during Correct your spelling
cell phone
a
day, and Correct article usage
the
this
avoid they
get in touch with other Correct pronoun usage
them
people
.
Another reason is that many of these individuals do not get in physical contact
anymore because they rather have video callings to get along with
others. Also
, they love to text to
each other Change preposition
apply
instead
of speaking with
because they find no Change preposition
apply
intersting
getting along. Correct your spelling
interest in
Furthermore
, many of them have invented a new written way to communicate each
other. To explain Change preposition
with each
further
, all over the world, many teenagers are so bored to write complete sentences that they use abreviations
that are difficult to Correct your spelling
abbreviations
understad
what those words Correct your spelling
understand
means
, so many parents have lost communication with their children.
In conclusion, I totally agree that Change the verb form
mean
smart phones
reduced Correct your spelling
smartphones
contact
among individuals because they are so fascinating to spend several hours
using their electronical
devices and they found not interested in Correct your spelling
electronic
speak
in person to each other. If Change the verb form
speaking
this
situation continuos
like Correct your spelling
continues
this
, society might get rid off
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contact
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