The map below is of town of Garldson, a new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps

shows

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the structure of Garldson

town

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and

two

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planned locations for building a supermarket. The

town

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is located between three other cities, on

northern

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the northern

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part is Hindon,

western

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the western

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part is near Brandson and on the eastern border there is Cansdon city.

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Town

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The town

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center

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is surrounded by industrial areas and there is a railway passing through these parts. houses are mainly built in the north and south of the

center

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and in the industrial zone. There are

also

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two

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main roads, one connecting Crandson to Brandson and the other

directly

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direction

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goes

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from Garldson to Hindon. There are

two

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places marked for the future supermarket.

First

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one, named

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S1, is in the countryside between Hindon and Garlson.

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location is seemingly close to industries and far from

housings

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housing

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. It is

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between the

two

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main transportation facilities, the main road and the railway.

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will be used mostly by people passing through these towns.

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, the other suggested site is in the middle of the

town

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center

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which is shown as S2 on the map. It is a more convenient place to build a market because it is closer to both living areas and industrial parts. Another positive point about

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location is its nearness to the railway.

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, the S2 location seems to be a better spot for building a supermarket

while

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the S1 position will have less usage for the community.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, two with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

235 words

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