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The graph below shows trends in US meat and poultry consumption.

The graph below shows trends in US meat and poultry consumption.
#trends #meat #poultry #consumption
The line graph gives information
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 changes in per capita
consumption
 of
beef
, pork, broiler and turkey in the United States between 1955 and 2012.
It is clear that
 the
consumption
 of
beef
 was by far the most popular of the four
kind
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 of meat from 1995 until 2009.
However
, there was
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considerable
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increased
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 in broilers consumptions over the period given and
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 as the most consumed meat in the USA. Between 1995 and 1976,
beef
consuption
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consumption
 rose significantly from 60 lbs to a peak of 90 lbs per
person
 per year.
Similarly
, during the period,
the
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broiler
consumption
 rose to nearly 30 lbs per
person
,
while
 the
figured
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 for pork fluctuated between 50 and 40
pounds
 per
person
. Turkey was by far the least popular meat, with figured below 10
pounds
 per capita each year By 2012, the
beef
consuption
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consumption
 of Americans drop by around 50
pounds
 per
person
.
By contrast
,
the
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broiler
consumption
 rose significantly and reach its peak
around
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 2
pounds
 more than
the
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beef
consumption
. There
was
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 no significant changes in the trends for pork ( approximately 50
pounds
 ) and turkey (around 10
pound
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pounds
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)
consumption
 for the whole year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, beef, person, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figured" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 3 times.
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