The diagram below shows the production of olive oil. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing olive oil, which consists of seven stages, and requires a manual workforce and special equipment.
To begin
with, olives are picked up from the trees manually by workers, who then
store them into baskets and carry fruits to a special machine,where they are rinsed with cold water. Following
this
, a belt of olives is transferred into a smashing machine, where an olive paste and olive stones are produced. After that, the olive paste is packed into bags with holes, for further
pressing, whereas
stones do not require any further
processing . Created emulsion then
is separated in a centrifuge with two products as an outcome: water( as a waste product) and the oil itself. The final diagram describes storage in warehouses and the sale of the commodity in supermarkets.
Overall
, the process of producing olive oil is a multistage one, which involves human resources and complex machinery.Submitted by annaosmatesko on
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