In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using mobile phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

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In the modern tech world, the majority of

people

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will prefer digital

payment

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methods rather than cash.

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cashless

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is more effective, a minority of

people

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are still not ready to accept the changes.

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essay intends to analyse both types of payments and I personally side with the former view.

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, it is a fact that the new generation has been growing with technology. So their lifestyle

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will be changed. Card

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will help us to make our purchasing quite effective, easy and eco-friendly.

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, during the COVID pandemic, all types of shopping and paying had to be done online only and

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saved us from direct contact with others and

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helped us to minimise the spreading of the virus.

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, carrying a high volume of money will be resolved with digital cards and less use of paper will be helped us to lead a pollution-free environment.

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digital

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has benefits, some

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like senior citizens or

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who are not well-educated are not able to make the changes yet.

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, lack of knowledge and awareness is

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a big factor in

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, online scams are supposed to happen and the main target will be old age and illiterate

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. Unfamiliarity to handle electrical equipment and technical methods like OTP, and QR code scanning is

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a big deal for them.

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, even though there are both pros and cons to giving up cash, I believe that in the modern

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people

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will be advanced and the main effect of

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will be the replacement of cash.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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