Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Increased
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and the lack of housing supply are major concerns in many places. By relocating large businesses, including their factories and employees, to rural areas, these issues can be properly addressed. I personally find
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Idea justifiable;
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, at the same time, some other initiatives should be implemented if we expect to solve
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and housing
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effectively. Moving businesses and their facilities to the countryside will cause the urban population to shrink substantially as successful companies,
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as Apple, provide work for thousands of people.
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,
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, will relieve pressure on urban housing supply systems. Another apparent advantage of a decreased population is lower volumes of
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which help reduce
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congestion. In Hanoi
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, most people travel to work by private vehicles, and
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leads to overcrowded roads during rush hour. If big companies are based in rural areas and offer accommodation to their employees near their workplaces,
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will no longer be the case.
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, I think the mentioned
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are rather complicated and can only be solved completely by the introduction of some other measures. One example involves the development of road systems because narrow roads largely contribute to
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jams in major cities. Building wider roads and motorways will allow a greater number of vehicles, both private and public, and
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reduce
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congestion.
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, residential areas with small living spaces that can accommodate a growing population should be established in urban centres. In conclusion, I agree that relocating businesses to the countryside is one way to deal with
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and housing
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. I
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believe that we need a combination of
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approach and a number of other actions, as listed above, to tackle these
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in a more comprehensive manner.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • housing problems
  • countryside
  • large companies
  • factories
  • employees
  • urban areas
  • land availability
  • relocate
  • stimulate economic development
  • challenges
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • rural areas
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