Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? and What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed

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These days it is easy to work alone and at home and
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is widely spread these days and it is on hand for anyone around the world,
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to many opportunities for those seeking
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a job. I think
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reason why more people are focusing on improving their
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and working alone. Working for others
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will mean that you will rely on the salary that they chose for you and
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you can not make it better.
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who tell you when to come and when to live and
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you deserve to be promoted or not. These
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drawbacks of working in companies.
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, self-employing or working for
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when to come when to live and what to concentrate on.
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most of the time individuals who
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business
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focus on their
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and learn faster than those who are waiting for
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commands and seek to satisfy their
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, many people choose to work by themselves because they find it
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financially
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, working for others means the
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employer
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the
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ideas and tasks, it
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means that he will not have freedom in deciding when to work and when to rest and many other constricting points.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-employment
  • freelancing
  • entrepreneurship
  • autonomy
  • financial stability
  • work-life balance
  • financial insecurity
  • lack of support
  • resources
  • long working hours
  • uncertain income
  • job security
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