The charts below show ưhat UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008

The charts below show ưhat UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008
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The information presented in the bar graphs pertains to
students
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in the United Kingdom who completed their graduate and postgraduate degrees in 2008 but did not immediately begin working full-time jobs. After finishing their graduate or postgraduate degrees, a large number of
students
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have the goal of continuing their education at a higher level, regardless of the circumstances. It is estimated that there are approximately 17,000 graduate
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who are
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employed part-time.
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, more than 29,000
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decided to pursue
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education in other fields,
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more than 16,000 members continued to be without employment.
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to that, almost three and a half thousand
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have shown interest in volunteering. After graduating from college, around 2,500 individuals continued their education
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still maintaining a part-time job.
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was despite the fact that the number of post-graduates was declining. A little under 400
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have indicated that they are interested in participating in volunteer activities.
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