The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each categories from five organizations.
The bar chart illustrates how five organizations invested money into four different aspects(1) of the company, including machinery(2), building, staff training, and research.
Overall
, organization B
invested the most money in all aspects of its business, while
organisation
D invested the least. Organisation
B
spent the biggest proportion of their investment
on construction, at approximately €1.7 billion
, while
organisations
A, C
, D, and E
only invested around €0.5 million each. The second biggest investment
of organisation
Capitalize word
Organisation
B
was in research, at approximately €1.6 billion
, which was double the investment
of organisation
A in the same aspect. Capitalize word
Organisation
Organisation
C
invested approximately €0.7 billion
in research, while
organisations
D and E
both invested around €0.3 billion
. Staff training was the third biggest investment
of organisation
B
, at €1.5 billion
, however
it was the biggest Add a comma
however,
investment
ofCapitalize word
Organisation
organisation
A at €1 billion
. Meanwhile, organisations
C
, D, and E
all invested approximately €0.4 billion
. Machinery was the smallest investment
of organisation
Capitalize word
Organisation
B
, at €1.3 billion
, but the biggest investment
of organisation
Capitalize word
Organisation
C
, at €0.7 billion
. Organisation
A invested €0.8 billion
in machinery, while
organisations
D and E
only invested half of that amountSubmitted by tjumagul67 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
▼
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
▼
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
▼
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words b, organisation, investment, billion, organisations, c, e with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
▼