It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Nowadays more and more children start to become difficult to raise. Every

child

has to learn the simple rules that will help him to live in the world, but children

are very often violate

Change the verb form

are very often violated

show examples

this

Correct determiner usage

these

show examples

rules , but punishment method can not be used to teach them not to do it;

however

some

Correct quantifier usage

apply

show examples

times it can be used. In

this

Add a comma

,this

show examples

i

Change the capitalization

I

show examples

will explain what

an

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

I thinking about

tis

Correct your spelling

this

statement. When

child

Add an article

a child

the child

show examples

is educate

Change the verb form

is educated

show examples

he studies both social life and

scince

Correct your spelling

science

and sometimes the

child

can

misbehaves

Change the verb form

misbehave

show examples

. The first decision that the teacher will decide is to punish the

indiviual

Correct your spelling

individual

, but I think

this

is

a

Correct article usage

the

show examples

wrong way to

raising

Wrong verb form

raise

show examples

.The teacher

have

Change the verb form

has

show examples

to understand , why the

child

did any action and tell him without physical and

menthal

Correct your spelling

mental

pressure that he mustn't do like

this

. It will make

child

Add an article

the child

a child

show examples

to

Change the verb form

apply

show examples

love the teacher and influence on

child

's nature.

On the other hand

, I truly

belive

Correct your spelling

believe

show examples

that small punishments are acceptable , and sometimes are more effective than a previous method .

For example

, if

the

Correct article usage

a

show examples

small person had

a

Remove the article

apply

show examples

fighting

Replace the word

fight

show examples

in school parents can take his favourite

gadjet

Correct your spelling

gadget

gadgets

away for a week. After

that

Add a comma

,that

show examples

he might understand that

Correct your spelling

violence

violance

Correct your spelling

violence

is bad,

Correct your spelling

because

becouse

Correct your spelling

because

it will be

very

Add an article

the very

a very

show examples

boring week for