You agreed to take a particular job over the summer, but due to unforeseen circumstances, you can no longer take the position. Write a letter including: - Explaining your situation - An apology - Express that you would be interested in the position next summer Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir, My name is Lisa. I have been selected as a waitress in your restaurant for the summer job position. I was not only delighted to be hired by you but
also
counting the joining day.
Hence
, I was happy to earn some money during the vacation.
In addition
to
this
, I am asking an apology, because of not joining the position. All of a certain, my father got sick
as well as
went through heart surgery.
Apart from
this
, my mother is a working woman.
Hence
, it's only me, who has to take care of my father. It seems to me that now it's high time to fulfil my responsibilities towards my family.
Therefore
, I am not able to work
this
summer.
Moreover
, If you are interested to give me an opportunity for the next summer position, please let me know. I hope you would understand my current circumstance and anticipating a positive response from you. Yours Faithfully Lisa
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