The graphs below show the number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter Olympics.
The bar charts display how many
medals
were won by the top five countries throughout the Summer
and Winter
Olympics
. Overall
, while
during the Winter
Olympics
, Norway and the United States
achieved the top of the ranking, during the Summer
Games this
top was achieved by the United States
and Russia
, winning many more medals
than in the other Olympics
.
During the Winter
Olympics
, Norway and the United States
reached first and second position respectively, winning a total of around 360 and 310 medals
. First place was won by Germany with nearly 240 medals
, followed by Russia
, which won around 190 medals
. Although
Canada won more medals
than Russia
, it won fewer gold medals
, giving as a result
the last
position for them.
During the Summer
Olympics
, the United State was again on
the top of the ranking with a total of 2500 Change preposition
at
medals
, which positioned them first. Looking at the second and third position, Russia
and Germany won nearly 1800 and 1600 medals
respectively. The last
positions had an abysmal difference, with around 800 and 600 medals
won by Great Britain and France respectively. It is also
worth pointing out how Germany was third in both Games and how Russia
and the United States
place better positions in the Summer
Olympics
than in the Winter
Olympics
.Submitted by carlos.terapiaocupacional on
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