The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparision where relevent.

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the outcomes of a survey which shows the percentage of residents'

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routine

in buying and drinking

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coffee

and tea in five different cities in

Australian

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Australia

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Overall

, BothSydney,Melbourne, and Hobart presented the highest

porportion

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proportion

of going to a cafe for

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coffee

or tea in

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4weeks

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4 weeks

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,Brisbane and

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Adelaide

showed the lowest percentage of buying fresh

coffee

at the same time. Over 60%

percent

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of residents in Sydney, Melbourne, and H9bart went to a cafe for

coffee

or tea as it is

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shown

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%, 63% ,and 62% respectively. At the same time ,Hobart recorded the highest percentage

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55% of the residents who

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bought

brought

instant

coffee

in the

last

4 weeks, followed by Brisbane people at just 53%percent. Buying fresh

coffee

shows the lowest

percent

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in all cities, where

Sydny

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Sydney

present the highest

porpotion

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proportion

portion

below 45%percen,

while

Brisbane and

Adeliade

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Adelaide

shows

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the lowest

percent

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at the same rate of 30.

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