The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparision where relevent.
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The bar graph
illustrating
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in buying and drinking Correct your spelling
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of
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coffee
and tea in five different cities in Australian
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Australia
Overall
, BothSydney,Melbourne, and Hobart presented the highest porportion
of going to a cafe for Correct your spelling
proportion
a
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coffee
or tea in last
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the last
4weeks
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4 weeks
In contrast
,Brisbane and Adeliade
showed the lowest percentage of buying fresh Correct your spelling
Adelaide
coffee
at the same time.
Over 60% percent
of residents in Sydney, Melbourne, and H9bart went to a cafe for Change the spelling
per cent
coffee
or tea as it is showen
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shown
61
%, 63% ,and 62% respectively.
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55% of the residents who Change the word
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bought
brought
coffee
in the last
4 weeks, followed by Brisbane people at just 53%percent.
Buying fresh coffee
shows the lowest percent
in all cities, where Change the spelling
per cent
Sydny
present the highest Correct your spelling
Sydney
porpotion
below 45%percen, Correct your spelling
proportion
portion
while
Brisbane and Adeliade
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Adelaide
shows
the lowest Change the verb form
show
percent
at the same rate of 30.Change the spelling
per cent
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