Some people think climate change has a negative impact on business, while others think that it provides more business opportunities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is inevitable that the world suffered from many disasters caused by

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global warming nowadays. Some believe that it

detriment

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detriments

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several industries

due to

disturbance

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that it produces.

However

, others argue that

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could give a potential chance to create a new product for society. On the one hand, people think that the rapid change of

climate

has affected many

companies

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companies'

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productivity. It is because the

climate

stimulates some disasters

happen

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upredictably

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unpredictably

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without any prevention toward it.

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,

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Jakarta, which is a part of Indonesia

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located

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in

low

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land area, often

geting

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getting

a disaster in rainy seasons

particularly

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flood

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. It totally

disturb

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the road and

transportion

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transportation

transport

system which make their employee get many difficulties

to

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work

.

As a result

, the company should release a wise policy which

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their

employees

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safety and at the same time

they

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loss

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productivity.

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for

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others advocate the opinion that

climate

change is

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thing that can not be avoided by all companies.

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of

blamming

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blaming

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many downsides over it, the company could

work

innovatively. To

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illustrate

, when the disaster often

come

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in

wet

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season and it affects many companies to

work

at

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office

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. It is a new challenge for them to create something new

such

as providing a

work

application that

allow

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employee

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the employee

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to do

job

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their job

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everywhere. I do agree with

this

idea, as it can be beneficial for their company.

Furthermore

, an application that they create can be sold to

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other communities and be a new market income.

To conclude

, many disasters

come

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from the rapid change of

climate

are really detrimental

for

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global business.

However

, if

public

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can see the opportunity over

this

condition it will be

usefull

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useful

and gives them a new way to benefit

it

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from it

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.