You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: describe what the group does explain why the group is good for the community suggest alternative days and times for practice You should write at least 150 words.

Dear manager, I
sowjanya
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sow any
who is using your community
hall
with six of my friends to learn piano. I am writing
this
letter to inform you that we got a request to vacate the
hall
immediately because of our disturbances to the other people. Let me explain in detail, we are practising music in your community
hall
on Tuesday and Friday from 7.00pm to 8.30pm. ,
Actually
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we are learning piano to perform in some concerts, functions and family events and suddenly, my access card stops working and heard that I and my colleagues are not eligible to attend practice sessions at your place.
According to
us, it disturbs our timetable for many sessions.
Moreover
, we are sharing
this
talent with persons who are having disabilities so that they can earn some money to live. I and my friends request you to make us utilise your
hall
or to change the weekdays
according to
your wish because we are available at every time to practice. We are eagerly waiting for your response. thanking you, yours sincerely, sowjanya
koyi
Correct your spelling
koji
.
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