The bar charts below give information about the railway system in six cities in Europe.

The bar charts below give information about the railway system in six cities in Europe.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar charts below give information about the railway system in six cities in Europe.
The bar charts visualize the
railway
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system
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in different cities in Europe.
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, the longest and the oldest
railway
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system
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is in Paris among other capital Europe cities,
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Lisbon has numerous passenger
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the train
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, albeit the Paris
railway
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system
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was the oldest one, established in 1863, the commuters train in Paris was not as many as in Lisbon taking up 1927 million
passengers
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.
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Stockholm was the second largest
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rail track at around 199 kilometres of route, and the number of
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showed an increase substantially at above one thousand per year.
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, Madrid and Berlin were the recent
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system
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, which was operated from 1981 to 2000, and the total kilometres of the route were 11 and 28 respectively.
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the train
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in both cities had by far the lowest percentage with approximately less than a half.
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, Roma
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was the third capital city having the shortest route’s kilometres at 126, and only 144
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passengers
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compared to another urban city in Europe.

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