Some employers offer their employees subsidized membership of gym and other sport clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so. Consider the argument from both aspects of this possible debate and reach a conclusion.

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extra assets to their staff is becoming increasingly.

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people think that few

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unpaid

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for

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gym

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and other sports

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with that they will be fit and more active

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work

.

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of money.

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, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do

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reasons why these owners offer extra benefits to their workers and some of the challenges to be overcome. Let`s begin by looking at the advantage of free

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to

employs

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. One of the main

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of

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who are

physical

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healthy

while

with that

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company expenses

such

as medical insurance, sick leave and

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on it. What I mean by

this

is that

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are active in any

kinds

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of sports so they

are very encourage

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for

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work

and they do

every

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work

in

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very fast because they didn’t

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.

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,

Lodha

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group are very strict about

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employs

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fitness. As per

Mumbai

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times report 85%

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of employs

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employs

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are fit and active in

work

.

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companies

are getting more profit.

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, Adani group

employs

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are working very patiently to become

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no. 1 entrepreneur in the world,

moreover

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are working very hard, when they get more extra assets from

companies

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arguments

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in

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multinational

companies

’ staff are working under the pressure. To be more precise, they are physically fit

while

they are not fit mentally. Because these types of

companies

need

work

, they didn’t look,

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situation

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of

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the employs

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employs

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.

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worker

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are hares

by

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mentally.

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report who are working

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amazon, these

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are not happy with

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an employer

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employer

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but they didn`t get more

benefit

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from

companies

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. Another issue is that they don’t have much

time

to spend with family.

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, they took more than 12 hours

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from

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. They didn’t get

time

for

family

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whereas

they facing issues with families.

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process takes

time

and can be especially challenging if authorities did not get

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way to solve it. All things considered,

its

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good things for

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but

employer

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need to think about

mentally

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health

also

. You need to weigh up to

pros

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of

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company

expense

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and

companies

get profit when

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are healthy and the cons of staff working under the pressure and they don’t have much

time

. Personally, I believe the benefits in terms of enterprises

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lots of benefits to

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eventually outweigh any negatives.