People in many countries are spending less time with their families. What are the reasons, and effects of this?

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people
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more time with their families in several nations. It can
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due to
various reasons and it can
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that situation. One of the essential
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is
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some
people
put their work to be the first priority in their life. The majority of the workers are ideally working from eight AM to five PM from Monday to Friday, but in
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many
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not only
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to work until late on the working days but
also
sometimes they have additional work on
weekend
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.
Thus
, when they have free time, some
people
choose to have a rest and relaxing day by themselves.
Additionally
, some
people
think that it is not important to spend their moment with their families, particularly it happened in young adults who just
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from
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school or university.
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that age, they feel that spending time with their friends or lovers
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more exciting because they have many new experiences together.
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can give negative impacts
such
as
people
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close to their family sometimes can feel lonely and being
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introvert person because they do not
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use
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to
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their lives with others.
Furthermore
, it can make
people
hard to trust others because they cannot feel
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genuine bonding in their families and they do not understand how to start to make
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a connection
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connection
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connections
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with other
people
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demands of the workplace
  • digital technology
  • social media
  • individualism
  • erosion of family bonds
  • emotional distance
  • strain relationships
  • emotional support
  • negative impact
  • emotional, social, and academic challenges
  • neglected
  • guidance and support
  • stress and mental health issues
  • anxiety
  • depression
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