In recent time cyberspace has linked a significant number of people jointly while others opine that it is rather causing separation between families. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

It is argued most often that online community has been the greatest
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of broken
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others
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are of the view that it has been beneficial in merging folks around the globe. I opine that the former overshadows the latter in terms of easy accessibility and comfort. I will discuss both parts and state my stance.
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with, the world wide web comes in handy and reachable.
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makes it easier to use. With
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doors wide open, cybercitizens are exposed to reliable mediums through which they can reach out to
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with ease. It is with regard to
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, that I concur with the view that information technology has brought a lot of people
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all walks of life together without which it with have been rather difficult if not impossible. The advent of the website has bridged the gap between communities, societies, towns, countries, nations and continents
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that distance and no longer a barrier anymore.
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anyone, anywhere at any point in time can now merge with
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including friends and family around the world through the internet unlike before.
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, the stress which existed before the advent of the information space has drastically been resolved.
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is
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the fact that individuals all over the world
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technology can connect with
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in the comfort of their
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the internet aside from all its prons presents us with certain cons which may include the
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of broken
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I stand by my stance because even though it is true that it has negatively affected
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by causing separation it must be noted that it has
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helped connect a lot of
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as well. Again
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contrast,
families
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form groups via social media platforms to stay in touch with each other close and far. It cannot be overemphasised that broken
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long existed before the web. In
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,regard it will be judgemental
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that the internet is the greatest
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of separation between
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. In conclusion, I refute the idea that cyberspace is the greatest
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of divorce because it
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to a large extent unites
families
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by connecting them from all walks of life.

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