Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

University

education

is the key to getting a good job,

while

others believe that it is more useful to have

experiences

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and soft

skills

. In my opinion,

university

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education

plays an important role in academic jobs,

besides

,

experience

and soft

skills

are

also

the same

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in our business. On the one hand,

due to

some jobs required

higher

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a higher

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degree

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degrees

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in

the

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society, students are able to study comprehensive

knowledge

and professional courses in the

university

.

For example

, doctors study some professional medical

knowledge

in the

university

,

such

as

treat

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diseases, and so on. Teachers could study teaching

skills

and gain some

knowledge

of

education

in

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the

university

. After they graduate from

university

, it is so easy for them to find work. Meanwhile, well-educated people could secure decent employment, earn a higher salary and contribute more to

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society.

On the other hand

, in

the

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society,

experience

and

skills

,

such

as teamwork spirit and

communication

skill

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skills

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, are

also

essential for finding a good job. Possessing good

communication

skill

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skills

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can finish the company tasks effectively.

However

, some

high

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educated people do not good

in

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at

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communicating with others, and they may conflict with staff and even damage the

company

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company's

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benefit. The interviewers keep an eye on

communication

skill

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skills

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to recruit the staff, so developing

communication

skill

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skills

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is so important in

the

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daily life. In my opinion, we ought to realize

that

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the same importance between

university

education

and

experience

,

skills

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and skills

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. Students in the

university

should concentrate on studying the

knowledge

of

major

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their major

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. Meanwhile, they should participate in some volunteer activities to exercise

skills

and enrich

experience

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their experience

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during

university

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the university

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period. Because soft

skill

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skills

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and

university

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a university

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education

could help me get a good job more easily.