the chart below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050 . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparison where relevant
The given pie charts compare the
ages
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population
of two countries Yemen and Italy in the year 2000 and their figure Use synonyms
to
the year 2050. The Change preposition
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ages
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are separated into three categories :0-14 Use synonyms
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, 15-59 Use synonyms
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. Use synonyms
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, it can be seen clearly that in both countries , the number of people who are in their 15s-59s is expected to increase Linking Words
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whereas
the group of people over 60 Linking Words
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old make up the largest proportion of Use synonyms
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pie charts. Looking at the pie charts in more detail , in 2000, there was 46.3% Correct article usage
the two
in
the number of 15-59 Change preposition
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ages
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in Yemen, compared to 61,6% of that number in Italy.The figure of people who are 15-59 Use synonyms
years
old is anticipated to go up in the future , with 53.1% in total , Use synonyms
whereas
there has been a slight decrease in the proportion of the 15-59 Linking Words
ages
in Italy in 2050. In terms of the 0-14 Use synonyms
years
old group , a small proportion of 3,6% was witnessed in the Use synonyms
ages
of the populations of Yemen in 2000 and Use synonyms
this
data continues to experience a marginal increase in the following 30 Linking Words
years
.A similar tendency was seen in the percentage of 60+ Use synonyms
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italy’s
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Italy’s
population
, but it is predicted to rise significantly in the future , from 24,1% to 42,3 % .In the meantime , the percentage of Use synonyms
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years
is expected to undergo a slight downward trend in the future , from over a half to exactly 37 % and nearly a quarter to 11.5% respectively.Use synonyms
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