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the chart below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050 . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparison where relevant

the chart below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050 . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparison where relevant
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The given pie charts compare the
ages
 of the
population
 of two countries Yemen and Italy in the year 2000 and their figure
to
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 the year 2050. The
ages
population
 are separated into three categories :0-14
years
 , 15-59
years
 and more than 60
years
 .
Overall
 , it can be seen clearly that in both countries , the number of people who are in their 15s-59s is expected to increase
in
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 50
years
later
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,
whereas
 the group of people over 60
years
 old make up the largest proportion of
two
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 pie charts. Looking at the pie charts in more detail , in 2000, there was 46.3%
in
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 the number of 15-59
ages
’s
population
 in Yemen, compared to 61,6% of that number in Italy.The figure of people who are 15-59
years
 old is anticipated to go up in the future , with 53.1% in total ,
whereas
 there has been a slight decrease in the proportion of the 15-59
ages
 in Italy in 2050. In terms of the 0-14
years
 old group , a small proportion of 3,6% was witnessed in the
ages
 of the populations of Yemen in 2000 and
this
 data continues to experience a marginal increase in the following 30
years
 .A similar tendency was seen in the percentage of 60+
ages
 in
italy’s
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population
 , but it is predicted to rise significantly in the future , from 24,1% to 42,3 % .In the meantime , the percentage of
yemen’s
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Yemen’s
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ages
 and
Italy’s
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Italy
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age
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of
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0-14
years
 is expected to undergo a slight downward trend in the future , from over a half to exactly 37 % and nearly a quarter to 11.5% respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ages, population, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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