the chart below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050 . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparison where relevant
The given pie charts compare the
ages
of the population
of two countries Yemen and Italy in the year 2000 and their figure to
the year 2050. The Change preposition
for
ages
population
are separated into three categories :0-14 years
, 15-59 years
and more than 60 years
. Overall
, it can be seen clearly that in both countries , the number of people who are in their 15s-59s is expected to increase in
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whereas
the group of people over 60 years
old make up the largest proportion of two
pie charts. Looking at the pie charts in more detail , in 2000, there was 46.3% Correct article usage
the two
in
the number of 15-59 Change preposition
of
ages
’s population
in Yemen, compared to 61,6% of that number in Italy.The figure of people who are 15-59 years
old is anticipated to go up in the future , with 53.1% in total , whereas
there has been a slight decrease in the proportion of the 15-59 ages
in Italy in 2050. In terms of the 0-14 years
old group , a small proportion of 3,6% was witnessed in the ages
of the populations of Yemen in 2000 and this
data continues to experience a marginal increase in the following 30 years
.A similar tendency was seen in the percentage of 60+ ages
in italy’s
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Italy’s
population
, but it is predicted to rise significantly in the future , from 24,1% to 42,3 % .In the meantime , the percentage of yemen’s
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Yemen’s
ages
and Italy’s
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Italy
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of
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years
is expected to undergo a slight downward trend in the future , from over a half to exactly 37 % and nearly a quarter to 11.5% respectively.Submitted by bobong120906 on
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