The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six computer science subjects at a US university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph illustrates the sum of research students which consists of males and females who study at a US university in 2011 in computer discipline subjects.

Overall

, the number of men who did the research was higher than women in most subjects, except linguistics and natural

science

which was the same between both.

To begin

with, Mathematics, psychology, and natural

science

were the most favourite disciplines for male participants as there were 200 men in each specific area.

Then

, followed by engineering and programming in which 150 male participants were in, respectively.

In addition

, the lowest man research student was in linguistics which fell below 100,

however

, the girls in the related subject over 100 students.

Next,

turning to female pupils. The most demanding disciplines among the six were natural

science

, psychology, and linguistics which were participated by over 100 women.

Thus

, natural

science

was the field of skill most in demand by all students.

Moreover

, the less interesting disciplines for women, with only 40 - 80 pupils, were engineering, programming, and mathematics.

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