The graph shows the changing patterns of access to modern technology in homes in the UK (expressed in percentage terms).
The line graph illustrates information about provides of
technologys
like CD and Correct your spelling
technologies
technology
DVD
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player
, mobile Fix the agreement mistake
players
phone
and internet connection in homes in Great Britain, over a period of 14 years from 1994 to 2008.
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phones
Overall
, it is clearly seen that provides of CD players in homes from the first year went up till Linking Words
exatly
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exactly
moment
, Correct article usage
the moment
howeve
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however
DVD
players and Use synonyms
internet
by far increased. Correct article usage
the internet
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pattern
of access Add an article
the pattern
a pattern
of
mobile Change preposition
to
phone
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phones
undergone
huge changes, like a rise and a fall.
In 1994 and 1995 provides of CD players was around Add a missing verb
has undergone
a
45 Correct article usage
apply
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percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
however
, only 1 year later in 1996 mobile Linking Words
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of access’s percentage reached approximately 18 Correct your spelling
patterns
pattern
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percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
DVD
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player
since 2002 had a rapid Fix the agreement mistake
players
surgue
to almost 80 Correct your spelling
surge
surged
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percent
and continued with gradually increase to more 85 Change the spelling
per cent
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percent
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per cent
in
the end of Change the preposition
at
period
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the period
a period
years
2005 and Correct article usage
the years
2006
the number of Add a comma
,2006
DVD
player users exceeded to amount of houses owning Use synonyms
of
mobile phones and reached around 80, Change preposition
apply
then
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number
of mobile users was steady till the end of Add an article
the number
a number
period
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the period
a period
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