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Question: In order to alive traffic problems, government should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportlong. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

#traffic #government #tax #car #owners #money #transportlong
The phenomenon of requiring higher
tax
 on the people who
owns
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car
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the car
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to
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the
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public
transportlong
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transport long
transporting
 has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent as people's views on
this
 issue in question may be, I believe
this
 approach would bring us more
benfits
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benefits
 than drawbacks. Regarding the drawbacks of
increaseing
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increasing
tax
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of
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on
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 private
car
 owners, probably the most significant one is that the financial pressure
of
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 families will be escalated and affect their life
quanlity
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quality
.
For instance
, purchasing
car
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a car
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 in
a
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 industrial city would help some families with kids in saving time since parents need to take their kids to school and pick them up.
Private
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The private
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car
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cars
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 can help them reduce the time
on
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in
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the
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apply
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traffic.
However
, the extra
tax
 will lower
their
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 money that storing for their
children
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children's
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 education in the future. Despite the aforementioned disadvantage, I still believe that its advantages can outweigh the drawbacks. There are serval benefits of using their
tax
 to enhance long-distance transportation, probably the first pop-up in my mind is that
this
 can effectively reduce the number of
vehicle
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vehicles
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 on the road.
For example
,
huge
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tax
 would be a barrier of mind that
preventing
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 people to buy
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a vehicle
the vehicle
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vehicle
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vehicles
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.
Furthermore
,
less
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fewer cars
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car
 on the road would decrease the
polluation
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pollution
population
 of
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the atmostphere
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atmostphere
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atmosphere
. Under
this
 line of thinking, it seems to me that increasing frees of private vehicle ownership would reduce the traffic jam and alleviate the
emmission
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emission
emissions
 of carbon
diioxide
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dioxide
 which is more important
that
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 helping some
specify
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 families to reduce time
lose
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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