Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel.Write a letter to the airline.

Deparment
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Department
to
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Customer Service Airline X Barcelona, Spain Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express
you
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to you
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my concern about losing my
bag
in
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on
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flight
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the flight
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to Barcelona - London
last
Friday at 18:00
with
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your company flight. The problem began when I didn't have a space for my luggage and
then
,
air
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the air
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hostess
safe
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saved
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my
bag
in
last
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the last
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seat but I
seated
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sat
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in the first line and I
coundn't
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couldn't
pick up my luggage. First of all, I request you to please
avail
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allow
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me a find my
bag
because I have my wallet and my
iphone
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iPhone
phone
to work inside, and
then
I can't work without my luggage. I would be very
thankful
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grateful
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if you
can
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could
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consider my situation and issue me my
bag
. I assure you that I will buy more space in my booking. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Mireia.
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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