The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

The chart illustrates the

amount

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of people in

percentage

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the percentage

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who consumed five servings of

fruits

and

vegetables

per day in eight consecutive

years

beginning from 2001. People are divided into three

groups

: men, women and children.

Overall

, the

percentage

of people who ate five portions of

fruits

and

vegetables

had increased with just a slight decline in

last

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two

years

. Women in all the

years

were the biggest group of all. But the difference between

groups

had become insignificant in the

last

years

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. The

percentage

of women who ate

fruits

and

vegetables

started at over 20% in 2001 and was increasing gradually till reaching a peak of nearly 35% in 2006. But

then

it started to slowly

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down to nearly 30% in the

last

year. In terms of men and children, the

percentage

stood relatively still for the first three

years

with about 17% and 12%

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.

Then

, the proportion started to climb gradually to reach the highest point for both

groups

in 2007 with about 27% for men and 25% for children. In the

last

year

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the

consuming

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of

fruits

and

vegetables

decreased slightly and both

groups

lost several

percent

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.