You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, Recently , I saw your brochure about seven days walking trip in the hilly areas and I am extremely interested in it,

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I am worrying about my health and I might not be able to do

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very well. I love to walk in mountains for long hours since my childhood and I prefer to spend some moments in hilly locations where there is a huge calm and a unique experience of life .

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why I want to take part in

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challenging opportunity. I have a few questions regarding

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trip . First of all , could you please tell me about the exact starting date of

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tour so that, I can work on my fitness level in advance ?

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, if it is possible for you

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could you please send me your price lists for

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oncoming walking trip ? Physically, I am not a fit person because I am 40 years old now and sometimes I feel tired after doing a lot of physical work.

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reason, I am looking for some arrangements that you could offer in case of any emergency. I am eagerly waiting for your response soon . Hopefully, I will be able to fulfil my goal soon. Yours sincerely, Rahul Sharma .

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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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