The graph below shows electricity production (in terawatt hours) in France between 1980 and 2012.
The illustration provides data related to four different ways of electrical
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generation in France, over the course of thirty years, starting in 1980 until recently. It's conspicuously obvious that the dominant source of Use synonyms
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