You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to you to introduce my problem with my new accommodation. I am a student in college.

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in an apartment at

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college with another student.

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, there are a lot of problems with my new accommodation.

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study

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, I cannot relax properly because of the inconvenience of my new apartment. There is only one room to sleep us.

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reason, I cannot get ready for

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college. She goes to bed very early after dinner.

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I have to sleep. Because I cannot able to work with darkness. I would prefer to live alone in one room. Now I am asking you to change my accommodation to another one. It would be good if it

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on the third floor. I hope you will resolve the matter to our satisfaction. If you need any other details, please feel free to write to me. I would certainly be interested in hearing from you soon. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours sincerely, Dream girl RASHIDOVA S.

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

182 words

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