You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear sir or madam, I am writing

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letter to know about the one-week walking tour in the Kangchenjunga mountains in august. As I was very interested

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place I want to ask you a few questions regarding accommodation, food and body fitness. Let me explain to you in detail, As I am working as a software employee I should ask for leave from my head of department and complete most of the work

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left and I should pack my baggage with whatever is needed for

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trip like clothes, food, and shoes. I

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know from you about the price of

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tour and anything that should be paid before entering to climb the mountains.

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, I am an unfit person

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my work lifestyle and because of my work-from-home schedule. Is any fitness needed for

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trip,

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, required wanted to train me to make

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a successful trip. I am very thankful and waiting for a fast reply from your side. yours faithfully, sowjanya

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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6 paragraphs

176 words

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