These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant period of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties.

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recent years, more people move abroad for different purposes, one for career opportunities,

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others aim for

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and better quality of

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situation.

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with, going to

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may be good for career opportunities, especially when it is offering

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salary. Being in

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community and environment may boost our confidence and

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, and eventually will

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for the companies.

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, for education purposes,

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the chances to meet with various backgrounds of students and professors.

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involved in

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better quality education will lead us to be more

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in the future. On the other

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have some drawbacks.

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, when we craving for our traditional foods and it is quite hard to find in

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area, we may experience

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feeling.

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too many of these

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may lead us to frustration and stress

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and eventually will affect our

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or work at that time. Another example is when the culture in the region is really different

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ours. It

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can be a

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for the first time, and we need time to adapt. In conclusion,

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to another country for job or education purposes may lead us to future success, but

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have many challenges that we have to overcome

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