These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant period of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties.

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recent years, more people move abroad for different purposes, one for career opportunities,
while
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and better quality of
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may be good for career opportunities, especially when it is offering
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salary. Being in
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community and environment may boost our confidence and
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, and eventually will
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for the companies.
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the chances to meet with various backgrounds of students and professors.
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involved in
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better quality education will lead us to be more
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in the future. On the other
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,
being abroad
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also
have some drawbacks.
For example
, when we craving for our traditional foods and it is quite hard to find in
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that
area, we may experience
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feeling.
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too many of these
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may lead us to frustration and stress
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and eventually will affect our
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or work at that time. Another example is when the culture in the region is really different
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ours. It
also
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for the first time, and we need time to adapt. In conclusion,
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to another country for job or education purposes may lead us to future success, but
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