Some educationalists argue that non-exam, arts-based subjects, such as music, drama, art and craft should be compulsory in the secondary school curriculum. They believe that activities such as these can improve overall performance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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In many schools around the world, teachers are teaching The Arts to students and the curriculum of
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secondary schools Correct article usage
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include
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includes
this
. Many people say that these art
-based subjects
are unnecessary and pupils have to focus on science subjects
but some people disagree and they believe that teaching art
can help them. This
essay explains why it is beneficial for them.
In my opinion, some pupils understand art
more than other subjects
and teaching them art
could reveal their talents. To illustrate, many children get enthusiast
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enthusiastic
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about
art
and they have natural talents in art
. For instance
, a student that learn
how to draw or build handicrafts in his or her earlier stages of life, one day could become an outstanding designer because his or her skills Correct subject-verb agreement
learns
was
enhanced in childhood. Change the verb form
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Therefore
, teenagers who get skilled in art
-based subjects
and are more into it can pave the way of
success more easily than others.
From my point of view, another factor Change preposition
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that
art
could result in
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,
is that students can find their path sooner and find out Remove the comma
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who
they want to be. To put it another way, a child who gets to know fine artsChange the pronoun
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realizes Remove the comma
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that
what is going to do someday for society and understands what occupation is good for him or her. Correct word choice
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For example
, a child learns how to act in secondary school and gets passionate about that subject and chooses his or her carrier sooner and does not waste his or her time. Hence
, learning art
could be beneficial for those who want to find out about themselves.
To conclude
, many schools are involving art
subjects
in their programs and I think art
could be an integral part of youngsters
lives. Teachers have to play their part in teaching them as the best they can to give Society perfect artists.Change noun form
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