Some educationalists argue that non-exam, arts-based subjects, such as music, drama, art and craft should be compulsory in the secondary school curriculum. They believe that activities such as these can improve overall performance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many schools around the world, teachers are teaching The Arts to students and the curriculum of

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secondary schools

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. Many people say that these

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are unnecessary and pupils have to focus on science

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but some people disagree and they believe that teaching

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can help them.

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essay explains why it is beneficial for them. In my opinion, some pupils understand

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more than other

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and teaching them

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could reveal their talents. To illustrate, many children get

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and they have natural talents in

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, a student that

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how to draw or build handicrafts in his or her earlier stages of life, one day could become an outstanding designer because his or her skills

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enhanced in childhood.

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, teenagers who get skilled in

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and are more into it can pave the way

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success more easily than others. From my point of view, another factor

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teaching

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could result

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,

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is that students can find their path sooner and find out

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they want to be. To put it another way, a child who gets to know fine arts

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realizes

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what is going to do someday for society and understands what occupation is good for him or her.

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, a child learns how to act in secondary school and gets passionate about that subject and chooses his or her carrier sooner and does not waste his or her time.

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, learning

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could be beneficial for those who want to find out about themselves.

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, many schools are involving

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subjects

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in their programs and I think

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could be an integral part of

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lives. Teachers have to play their part in teaching them as the best they can to give Society perfect artists.