You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter, Explain why you would like the job Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ. Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia. Write at lease 150 words.

Dear
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Adam, I am writing to express my candidate for
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advertisement in an
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Australian
magazine that you posted. My name is Leyla Karimli and I
am
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recently graduated from the
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assistance
program. I was
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honor
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student and there
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some reference
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I worked as
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babysitting
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with their children. I am
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, energetic and
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reliable
person.
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interest
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child
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psychology
and it is very important to protect children's mental health for me.
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why I always act very sensitive in these issues. We will
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play educational games together and spend our time very
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and enjoyable.
Consequently
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your kid if you will select me. By the way, in my leisure
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I would like to visit museums and to learn
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of
this
country. I am
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outgoing person and it would be
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opportunity to develop my general culture. Thank you in advance, I will
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your positive answer with impatience. Leyla Karimli, Yours sincerely,
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