You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six year old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter, Explain why you would like the job Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ. Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia. Write at lease 150 words.
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Dear
Mrs.
Adam,
I am writing to express my candidate for Change the punctuation
Mrs
relevant
advertisement in an Correct article usage
a relevant
Austrailan
magazine that you posted.
My name is Leyla Karimli and I Correct your spelling
Australian
am
recently graduated from the Unnecessary verb
apply
child care
Correct your spelling
childcare
asisstance
program. I was Correct your spelling
assistance
a
Change the article
an
honor
student and there Change the spelling
honour
are
some reference Change the verb form
is
letter
from Fix the agreement mistake
letters
parent
Fix the agreement mistake
parents
Change preposition
for which
which
I worked as Correct pronoun usage
whom
a
Remove the article
apply
babysitting
with their children. I am Replace the word
babysitter
fun-loving
, energetic and Correct article usage
a fun-loving
realible
person.
Correct your spelling
reliable
Furthermore
, I have big
interest Correct article usage
a big
to
child Change preposition
in
phsicology
and it is very important to protect children's mental health for me. Correct your spelling
psychology
That is
why I always act very sensitive in these issues. We will to
play educational games together and spend our time very Fix the infinitive
apply
effective
and enjoyable. Change the word
effectively
Consequently
, you will ensure about
your kid if you will select me.
By the way, in my leisure Change preposition
apply
time
I would like to visit museums and to learn Add a comma
,time
history
of Add an article
the history
this
country. I am very
outgoing person and it would be Add an article
a very
great
opportunity to develop my general culture.
Thank you in advance, I will Add an article
a great
wait
your positive answer with impatience.
Leyla Karimli,
Yours sincerely,Add the preposition
forwait
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