Governments should make more effort to promote alternative sources of energy. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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vital in a technological era and

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lawmaker should build extra efforts to encourage different

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essay would shed light on the valid points in the subsequent paragraphs. To commence with the favour of notion,there are innumerable factors behind the proportion The first and foremost point is that owing to unsustainable use of primary

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resources.Day by day the use of non-renewable

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is increasing and which not only reduce the number of fossil fuels but

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leads to deforestation in order to make

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environmental organisation where found that if we depend on a single

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the resources of non-renewable

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threat of extinction.

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sources

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as a

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of pollution

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which leads to global warming .inaddition

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relying on a single

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the cost of

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increasing with time and

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lawmakers should emphasise

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alternative

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because it helps not only to reduce the pollution but

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helps to decrease the cost of

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tend to reiterate that

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we mostly use the primary

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make effort to shift to

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alternative

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