More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?

It has come to the attention of a lot of people that an

increasingly

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number of individuals are moving from rural to urban

areas

aiming for a

job

. Issues like

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shortages, housing pricing rise and rural depopulation could occur

consequently

to

this

relocation trend, depending on how effectively governments will address

this

phenomenon. On

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hand, a major number of people applying for a

job

in cities results in a higher demand for occupations, higher competition between applicants and,

accordingly

, in

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scarcity. I would argue that

a

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first effective solution should be provided directly by the government by sponsoring new numerous career

opportunities

and pushing multiple

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to do so too. On

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hand it is reasonable to assume that the dense concentration of citizens in towns will result in a shortage of affordable housing since prices of house market will easily skyrocket. Something

authority

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should do in order to fix

this

issue is

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in real estate development so that more suitable accommodation can be available for workers.

Lastly

, rural depopulation is another stumbling consequence that needs to be addressed. Arguably, a growing number of workers moving to urban

areas

will leave

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almost completely abandoned. Even though metropolis and suburban

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offer multiple

opportunities

it could be argued that agricultural

areas

do too.

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Agriculture

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and agriculture careers are real

opportunities

and they need to be preserved and implemented as much as

cities’

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ones

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. Given the situation, I would suggest that creating financial incentives

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those who will continue or will want to work in

backcountry

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would be particularly beneficial to deal with

this

problem specifically. In conclusion,

people

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long-term relocation

in

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cities will cause several issues if not managed properly by ministries. In order to tackle

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these potential consequences the government needs to play

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crucial in investing and financing

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their

job

opportunities

and careers

as well as

in their accommodations in both central

areas

and backcountry to keep an efficient balance between them.