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In many countries around the world, young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answers and include relevant examples.

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Nowadays, adolescents start to live by themselves right after they graduate from school. They
move
 out and either live on
a
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private property or
sharing
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 a place with their friends.
This
 is a negative trend because most high school graduates will not get a proper job which may
also
 cause them to have inadequate money to pay for housing fees. In recent times, many youngsters
move
 out from their
parents
' place right after they finish school.
This
 has become a mainstream thing all around the world, especially in western countries. Moving out from
parents'
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 house actually can teach younger generations how to be responsible yet
also
independent
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an independent
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 person.
However
, it would be very challenging for them to take care
their
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 own household
while
 they are just introduced to adulthood. If they stay in their
parents'
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parent's
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 house, they do not need to worry about the household, as their
parents
 will be responsible for it. For most
highschool
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 graduates, finding a
high paying
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 job that can cover all their expenses will be quite tough as most of them will only receive minimum wage.
Thus
, many teenagers undergo financial struggles and housing rental fees would just be an unnecessary additional expense. If they are able to stay in their
parents'
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 place for free, why bother moving out? I live in an Asian household and in our culture, it is very uncommon to
move
 out at a young age. Most Asian
parents
 would ask their children to stay as long as they want to help them save money.
To conclude
,
although
 teenagers can learn how to be independent and responsible by living on their own, moving out may
also
 cause financial difficulties.
Thus
, everyone should start to reconsider their decision to
move
 out before it is too late.
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