The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the distribution of different income groups in cities and regional centres of Australia.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of the
population
in
cities
and regional
areas
of Australia
according to
their annual
income
.
Overall
, it can be seen that people living in
cities
earn a higher average
income
than regional centres. In both
cities
and regional centres, the majority of the
population
are lower
middle
or
middle
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middle-income
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income
earners, which means they have a yearly
income
of $40,000-$70,000 and $70,000-$120,000 respectively.
However
, in
cities
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,cities
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the largest of these two groups is the
middle
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middle-income
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income
earners, at 35%,
while
in regional centres the largest group is lower
middle
at around 34%. Another similarity between
cities
and regional
areas
is that
highest
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and lowest
income
earners make up the two smallest
population
groups. Their yearly
income
is under $40,000 (low), and over $120,000 (high).
However
, in
cities
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the
low
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low-income
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income
group makes up only about 13% of the
population
, which is about 10% less than
regional
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in regional
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areas
. The high-
income
group
also
differs between the two
areas
,
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and is 5% greater in
cities
.
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